i’m not done, i mean i thought i was done, but no

a rewrite is required of the final story. a big rewrite. it makes sense, all of the critique, it does. and i agree with it.  that doesn’t stop me from wanting to lie on the living room floor and stare at the ceiling, oh no. because this fucking story is gripping me by the ankles.

could someone come over here and fix this story for me?